So, in my mind, the ideal story format for online writing is left-aligned paragraphs with a space in between each. Having putzed around the internets for a while, I'd say this seems to genuinely be the most readable way to look at stuff.
However, I do all my writing in Microsoft word, with tabbed paragraphs, like a print document, no space between paragraphs. Partially out of habit, partially because I do a lot of academic writing and it just looks better that way when writing something that's going to be printed out or otherwise published. The (admittedly very nice) Advanced Editor here can only handle about half of that.
So when I throw stuff up on this forum, I either have to do a ton of little edits on my lonesome, or find a way to cut & paste that both changes the paragraph format and preserves the text format of italics & etc. My current solution: the publishing thingamabob at fanfiction.net is pretty awesome. I have an account there where I write stuff that is not mpreg. So what I've been doing is copying what I write, pasting it into a temporary document there, and saving it. It translates all of the paragraphs into a more readable format while keeping all of my style choices. Then, after the document has been saved and reformatted, I copy the text and post it here.
This works, I think, pretty well. But I feel like I must be missing something obvious - like there's an easier way to do this that I'm not thinking of. Now, some authors here don't mess with format much, but some seem to use/need the same kind of thing I do, so I was wondering how other people deal with the same issue. Or am I the only one who grumbles about this?
I usually reformat my page layout before I start typing in word. Single space, with no indents, but then again, I am used to putting an extra space in between paragraphs for internet writing. That usually translates without any need for editing no matter where I post it.
When I write for school, I do the standard left indent, no space between paragraphs.
-- Edited by theKicking on Friday 25th of February 2011 08:12:47 PM
I don't really have your problem, because I have just always written all my fiction in a non-indented, spaced paragraph format. I even do it when I'm hand writing things. Sorry I can't be more helpful, but I will say I am 100% more likely to read something formatted that way.
The Kicking: The only other place I've written in is Open Office and I've got a 22chapter story all ready to be transferred to www.fanfiction.net. And after that was on the old forum. Like this one better. more room to write in and paragraphs are easier to place. Also love the preview feature. much better than the old site.
EPD, have you thought about joining together your short chapters into longer ones? I've noticed you have this tendency to write a lot of really short, short chapters, and I'm not sure they all deserve separate status. (Sorry, I teach writing sometimes, so I can come off as kind of a jerk, but I'm genuinely trying to be helpful.)
Yeah, this is pretty different from the format thing I was asking, but it's related in some ways. I think it might genuinely be better if you, EPD, took some of those very short chapters in Open Office and figured out which ones might go well together - worked them into longer bits of story so that you had a longer, more connected narrative. Right now, a lot of what you've got comes off as very choppy - the little bits feel like they could "talk" more to each other.
Rather than publish everything as soon as you write it, I think you might take a shot at keeping what you've written for a little while and seeing if you can add to it helpfully. Because twenty-two chapters . . . man, that's a lot. I know this is sort of outside the format question I was asking, but I feel like your stuff can be sort of hard to read, because it feels like it sort of jerks around a lot. I think you might be better off working up longer pieces and publishing them less frequently.
I edit a lot. A LOT. Like, a stupid amount. Probably too much. We're probably at opposite ends of the spectrum in terms of how we write - how much we edit and change and format and so forth. But I feel like I have trouble reading you partially because of how you choose to publish, and it might not be a bad thing to look at that process.
Please stand by: I was never a writer in high school. Had trouble with esseys and reports. But I got the secretary's position on a condo board and that made me have to write business letters and the building's minutes. Then once I got my first computer I all of a sudden began writing. In chat boards like Beliefnet and HBO Sex and the City.
But then I found this one or I should say the old fourm. There's only one story now on Open Office. All of the other stuff is here. Thanks for the critism I take every word of it as a learning lesson.
You're right I did do a fair amount of editing on some of the stories before the boards moved here~ almost got sick. This board is much easier to use. Still getting the hang of it. When it comes to writing the stories I was trying to make them as long as possible. But I also don't want the deliveries in "the pregnancy/pregmancy experiement" to seem that they're happening "Too fast" I wanted them to appear "normal"
The other stories are in "real time/9 month pregnancy/pregmancy time".
EPD - it can be really hard for everyone to see potential issues in their own writing. You know how it is. You spend hours and hours looking at your own stuff, and after a while, you can't even see the things you've done that are silly or weird or just even . . . grammatically incorrect. I have trouble remembering how to spell "license" and "embarrassed," for example, and sometimes I make up words. (What, "topsheet" isn't a real word? Screw you, MS Word, I'm using it anyway.)
I get what you're saying, but don't forget - your reader is reading your chapters right after each other, so it CAN seem very fast to them when you jump from episode to episode. You might want to ask someone to cast an eye over your fiction to see if they have any advice before you post it.
Nothing we write is ever finished, you know. Everything's a draft.