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"Chapter 1 - It's Here"

It was the 20th of December, bitterly cold and such a beautiful, cloudless winter's night. The residents of Grayson's Point were gingerly going about their evening business. Being such a quiet mountain town in Canada's extreme north, what else was expected.
The locals were a loving, warm people. Dating back to the Gold Rush. The local stores run by generations of families. The local schools and High School were attended by generations of children and teenagers alike. The perfect kind of town to settle and raise a family away from it all. The nearest city, Toronto was almost 100 miles away by road and a light commuter plane ride of about 40 mins.

The vast forests surrounding her were alive with the sounds of the night. Wolves howled, bears slumbered and squirrels nested. Icicles hung from the fir tree branches, deep snow lay on the ground.

It was all disturbed violently in a clearing under the new winter's Full Moon.

A young man screamed out in agony as he tore at his clothing, sweat pouring from him as he sought to rid himself of his gear. His muscles contorted and his bones cracked as he rolled in the snow, screams now contorted into deep vocalised growls and whimpers. His abdomen sucked and gargled into a tight muscled cavern as his ribcage distorted and his spine curved, forcing him onto all fours. His jaw and cheekbones distorted amid sickening crunches into an elongated snout armed with fierce, glistening teeth. Slick, black fur now covered his entire body, his eyes opened to reveal evil glistening, golden fireballs. The young visitor was no more, he had been replaced with an evil demon, his clothing ragged in the snow. The Beast sniffed the night air, growling and drooling. An evil and fierce howl boomed throughout the forest as it took run towards Grayson's Point. It knew what it needed, this one night of the year it had to secure the future of its kind. It needed a host, a body to carry and birth it's young cub.

Garry Howstead, the youngest of Al and Lisa Howstead's 4 boys was out with his mates, drinking and smoking pot. He had finished school term for the Christmas break and was looking forward to two long weeks of chilling out and cutting loose with his groupies. His cellphone rang out loudly. It was his Mom, asking him to come home as it was dark out and to make sure he was in a fit state or he would feel his father's belt. Al Howstead was a muscled, imposing man. Typical Army General, serving since leaving Grayson's Point High in the Summer of 75. Not an unkind man but raised the hard way. He had never lifted a finger to his beloved Lisa, he treated his wife with repect and made love to her like a gentleman, unless when she was feeling particularly filthy. He loved his sons dearly. He was present for each birth, boy scouts, first dates. Each one had his own faults and strengths but by god when his boys stepped out of line, they learned respect.

Garry at that ripe resentful and disrespectful age of 18 was trying his father's patience tonight. He told his Mom he'd be home soon and hung up. The boys were hanging in the local Memorial Park. It was vast and dark with many shadows and lots of snow. Garry lived on the opposite side of town across a few hundered feet of fields at the back of the park. He felt like a walk and said goodnight to his friends. He began the long, cold walk back but didn't feel like he normally did. Nothing scared him but tonight he felt ill at ease. Like something was watching him.

The Beast, fat from the meal it had just killed and consumed waited intently, watching, stalking for any signs of movement. Its urge to mate was growing like a fiery hot heat within. It was unsettled and growled menacingly. TWIG SNAP. It crouched low on its clawed paws, silent. THERE. It saw him. It smelled him. It wanted him. Crouching to the ground it silently stalked Garry until it was less than 2 feet from him. Leaping into the air it brought him down with a thump, knocking him unconscious in the fall. With a swift clawed movement it ripped the jeans clean off and climbed atop Garry's limp body and did its disgusting deed. It put an over sexed dog to shame. Climbing off, spent, it bounded back into the hunderds of miles of black, dense forests. A howl split the silent night as the big yellow moon shone bright across the land.

Garry lay in the cold snow, unconscious and naked from the waist down. There was little evidence of what had happened to him. The pain of a forced deed would diminish to an un-noticable ache by morning. The internal going's on were a different story. A single egg was forcing its way out of his digestive tract into the cavity between his muscles and his intestines. It fixed itself onto a nearby artery and began to grow gently. Garry, completely unaware of the abomination now growing in his belly, awoke and ran home. He had no memory of the terrible ordeal or of what was to come.


Chapter 2 following soon :)



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Why is Creedence Clearwater's Revival's Bad Moon Rising going thru my brain as I read this? i'm seeing a earily scary black swamp and a pregmancy story evolving.

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"Chapter 2 - The Full Moon"


Garry was disorientated, no doubt from the alcohol and weed coursing through his system. Al Howstead was furious. He boomed his anger at Garry. "What the hell did you think you were doing? ANSWER ME DAMMIT!" Garry started to weep. "Dad, I'm sorry. I didnt think anything like this would happen. You always taught us to look out for ourselves. Paul, Grady, Hal and I were just havin fun. I started to walk home and BAM! I dunno what it was. I dunno anything else." Al continued his tirade. "Garry, you're young and foolish to think you can protect yourself while smoking that shit and and getting pissfaced. I dunno what to do with you, I can't even look at you."

Garry felt stung, yes he agreed in part with his Dad but thought he knew better when his own actions were involved. He felt sore, battered. His head hurt from the blow. "What was it, why did he hurt so, his belly ached." he thought to himself. Al brought him back to the present. "Get Upstairs, I'll deal with you in the morning." Garry got to his feet and left. Lisa and Al comforted one another over a JD on the rocks. "Lisa, honey, what the hell are we gonna do with him?" Lisa Howstead, a petite, blonde woman in her mid thirties. She was a gentle, timid woman but knew how to discipline her boys in Al's absence. Work took him away often. "Honey, I honestly don't know. He sure as hell is set on ruining his life these days." Al banged his empty glass down on the study. "Well I'll be fucking damned if he does it on my watch, tomorrow he's coming to the Base with me. I'll get him a job and he can work for his allowance. But seriously honey, what happened tonight, why did he show up here half clothed and terrified? Sure he's been attacked by someone but why?" It was Lisa's turn to hypothesize "I don't know. Did you notice the bruise on his head, he probably did it himself whilst taking a piss somewhere. You know young boys!!" Al chuckled "Yeah, I was one of them myself, remember? God it seems so long ago!" Lisa laughed in return. "I'm remembering a young cadet trying his luck with me in Whiskeys Bar and Grill, down on 2nd Street. He was dashing and a bit of a dish. Shame about his jokes but that was what won me over!" Becoming serious for a moment Lisa added "All the same Al, I'm gonna make an appointment with Dr Whitton to have Garry checked over." Al nodded his agreement. With that they turned out the lights and took their leave to the master bedroom.

Garry was in his bedroom, he stood infront of his full length mirror and looked at his naked body. The bruises, the faint ache from his head. He was uneasy. His belly looked different, it bulged slightly, just below his bellybutton. It was a hard mass, he felt it several times. "Probably just an internal bruise or something." he thought. Climbing into bed he heard it, a blood curdling howl. Definately not dog or wolf. This was something else. At that moment the hard mass in his belly swelled, it moved. Garry sat up, alarmed. He put his hands to his belly and felt the weak flutters. It was like a slight tickling. He turned on the light and went to his mirror again. His belly was definately distorted. He didn't sleep all that night.


Al and Lisa awoke to the alarm clock, it was 07:00 and such a lovely sunny morning. Frigidly cold but sunny all the same. Al jumped into the shower as Lisa donned her dressing gown and slippers. She had her usual morning routine. First breakfast of pancakes and waffles. A steaming pot of fresh coffee on the stove and Al's newspaper on the table. She would leave the griddle to cool and the stacks of fresh pancakes and waffles were left on the side for the men to help themselves. She then sat down with her make-up case and mirror, applying with a fine finesse as she sipped her coffee. Al would always say she was like a spring flower. This made her smile. She liked to look good for her dashing soldier, well General now. Even after nearly 20 years of blissful marriage. She was the envy of all her girlfriends. Beautiful, successful mother and wife, no need to work. Most of the women in Grayson's Point had grown tired of their mundane lives and husbands but not Lisa Howstead.

Al was the first downstairs, he always looked so sexy in his Uniform thought Lisa. He grabbed a cup of coffee and several pancakes. Sitting down he poured the maple syrup and kissed her gently. "Honey, you look sensational! Where's Garry?" "Oh still upstairs, didn't hear him stir." The Howstead's three other sons were all absent. The eldest, Mark, was married and living in Toronto. His high-school sweetheart Ellie Garrett heavily pregnant with baby number one. The second, Thom, had followed in his father's footsteps and was currently serving abroad in the Hawaiian Islands. He had earned extra pride by recently being promoted to Lieutenant. The third, Darryl, was at college in Vancouver. Studying his second year in Medical Biology. The Howstead's were proud of their boys. They were all doing well for themselves, all except Garry. Al left the table in a mood, he stomped to the foot of the staircase. "Garry, get you're ass down here, NOW!"

Garry was lying perfectly still, disturbed. He had had a terrible night. A fever had gripped him around 2am and had only started to subside within the last hour. His body ached terribly. His belly had grown several inches to the point it was unmistakable. He felt it growing, this thing inside of him. It squirmed visibly and he had felt it all night, getting bigger and stronger. He was afraid, very afraid. He did not know what was happening to him. He creaked up onto his feet and put on a baggy pair of joggers and a hooded sweater. The joggers were tight against his growing bump. He looked in the mirror before leaving, making sure his body was not distinguishable. Coming down the stairs he clocked his father standing at the bottom. Al looked at him "Jesus boy, you look terrible, Lisa Com'ere!" His mother ran through the hallway and gasped at her son's visible state. "Oh honey, come here. Jesus Al he's burning." Al put his hand to Garry's head and winced apologetically. "Boy, you're mother is taking you to see Dr Whitton this morning." Garry thought about it and dismissed it only for a second but thought better of it. He lifted his hoodie and pulled the band of his sweats down to just above his pubic hair, exposing his swollen belly to his parents. "It's been growing all night, I think its how im so sick, whats happening to me Mom?? Dad please, whats happening?"

Al put his hand on Garry's belly and felt the light squirm, the flesh was burning hot to the touch. "Jesus, there's something in there, Lisa Hon feel it!" Lisa put her hand to her son's belly and yelped out at the heat and the light kick behind the skin. "Oh my God, Garry you've been like this all night?" Garry nodded with his eyes filling up. "Well why the hell didn't you come get us? How could you have lain there in such fear and not come get us?" Garry let a tear fall. "I was scared, I didn't know what would happen if I moved. The pain is getting worse and the fever is making me feel like shit." Lisa grabbed him into a tight hug, Al kissed his forehead. "Don't you worry Son, we'll get to the bottom of this. Now go take a shower and come back down for some breakfast."

Al called Grayson's Point Base and said he was taking a personal day, he knew that whatever was happening to his little boy, he had to be there.

Garry undressed in his room, the sweat making his clothes stick to him. Grabbing a towel he made his way to the bathroom down the hall. Stepping under the hot water made him feel light headed so he turned it to almost cold. The water ran over him as he lathered up and tried to make himself clean. The sound of the water drowned out any other noise. He suddenly felt a large movement in his belly and doubled over in agony. The thing was still growing. His belly lurched and emitted watery sounds as it swelled further. He quickly became overcome and collapsed onto the floor. The thing kicked and squirmed as he lay there. The final sound he heard before blacking out completely was his mother screaming out for his father to come quickly and to call an ambulance.


Chapter 3 coming soon :)

-- Edited by PoppedBB on Monday 21st of February 2011 02:18:10 PM

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"Chapter 3 - Hope in Grayson's Point"


Garry came to amid a scurry of ambulance technicians, he was wired to every possible machine in existence as they made their way to Haddows Memorial Hospital. His parents followed in the car behind at breakneck speed. He tried to sit up but a technician pushed him back on the bed. He then noticed his belly. It was getting bigger. Slowly but definately swelling. He looked around 7 months gone. The shorts his mother had hastily gotten him into were riding just above his genitals. The t-shirt was resting just below his pecs. The technicians had exposed his belly to keep an eye on it. It was gargling and pulsating frequently, the Thing moving around like a parasite. His bellybutton was shallowing out ever so slightly, the knotted scar inside protruding just above the ridge at its bottom. It threatened to pop out completely but it held off until the Thing grew bigger. The technicians looked at one another as they took charts and assessed his vital signs, taking the time to reassure him also. A hard bump under the wheels signalled the arrival at the ER entrance and the back doors opened immediately. Garry was stretchered out into the hallways and ran down to the main examination room. He was afraid but had his parents either side of him. Dr Whitton was waiting for them as they scurried through the doors which closed behind them.

Dr Leslie Whitton began his work immediately, he stethed the pulsating stomach before him, listening to the deep groans and slithery emissions as the Thing moved within. He then palpated it with his hands. Starting first at the top, down both sides, along the bottom and up the centre. Garry was almost terrified, he felt the pain of the Thing tirading around in his belly. His parents, mom almost hysterical, were of no good at all so Dr Whitton then asked for a sedative and administered it to Garry's left arm. He drifted off almost immediately. An amniocentesis was performed as were an ultrasound and heartbeat check. Taking Al and Lisa aside, he began his report.

"Al, Lisa, Garry has, how can I put this, somehow become pregnant. The fetus is perfectly healthy and by what i can tell is a boy. I also discovered through the ultrasound that the sac is adhered to the main blood vessel supplying his duodenum. How this child intends to enter the world is anyones guess. The amniocentesis I performed displayed some very strange and concerning results. The amniotic fluid is almost normal except for 2 key things, its much thicker than normal and has an unidentified chromosome, it is not human by my estimates. Who or whatever did this to Garry is in part not human. The results are "Canidae" in testing......."

Al burst in "What the hell does that mean Les?"

"It means wolf, the fetus growing within Garry is part wolf but It is also human, I can't explain it. I have never seen this kind of reproduction before, in 40 years of medical practise. The rapid growth suggests that he may be ready to give birth within as little time as tomorrow, its also the next Full Moon tomorrow evening. I'm risking saying this at the expense of sounding like a madman. I'd recommend you take him home and have me on 24hr standby, I could even stay at the house if you liked?" Lisa nodded her agreement "Yes, that would be great, Les. Thank you!" "Not at all, now you need to get him out of here before the Press and the Government find out about this. I have told the staff to keep this quiet or to face the consequences of a confidentiality breach." Al picked up his boy in both arms and left with Lisa and Dr Whitton behind him. Garry did not stir the whole ride home, Al lifted him from the car and carried him all the way upstairs to his bedroom. He pulled the duvet back and laid Garry down, making sure his head was properly supported by the pillows and folding the duvet back. Dr Whitton would be in the room the whole time observing Garry's condition. He kissed his son on the forehead, privately shedding a tear to signal his dismay at his very sick child. Garry's belly caught Al's attention as it pulsated and swelled further, like a giant beach ball, emitting watery reports. Finally under all the internal pressure, the bellybutton popped out into full glory, the cylindrical ridge of skin like a fence around the knot crowning above. Al gagged and left the room to vomit. He could not believe this was happening to his boy. As he lost his guts down the lavatory, Lisa went in to sit for a long while. She stroked Garry's hair, crying silently. She had an instinctual urge to put her hands on his belly. She did so and was aghast at the movement inside, it was powerful. She felt for her last born son, it ached her heart. He was handling this so bravely she thought.

Dr Whitton entered the room later that evening after dinner to find Garry still asleep deeply from the sedative. His t-shirt still pulled up to make sure any change inside his belly could be seen clearly and noted. He took a chair at the bedside, equipment and contacts available at the ready should a hasty procedure or delivery be required. The hours slowly ticked by with no change in Garry's condition. Dr Whitton stethed him frequently to listen for any changes in the fetus's behaviour, besides the occasional grumble and natural intestinal activity, nothing was out of the ordinary. Dr Whitton lost track of time and slowly drifted off.

He awoke with a startle as the alarm on Garry's bedside table signalled 08:00. He hit it to silence and realised Garry's bed was empty. He sat up immediately and made a start for the stairs. He walked to the kitchen where the Howstead's were eating breakfast. He smiled at them. "Why didn't you waken me?" Lisa smiled in return "We didn't want to, you looked so exhausted." Garry looked up at him from dark ringed eyes "Thanks Doc, I'm still in pain but ravenous for food." Al looked to his son and then to his enormous, pulsating belly. It was just barely covered by a bathrobe, a slight crack in the material allowing the engorged bellybutton to poke through. Les sat down to a plate of pancakes and a cup of fresh coffee. Garry stood up wincingly and took his leave for a shower. Al Howstead was first to speak "Les, what on earth is happening tonight? We wanna know! Is Garry going to be alright?" Lisa piped in "Yes Les, just tell us the truth!" through tear filled eyes.

"I honestly don't know, I have a team on standby to come here to the house if we need them. It maybe neccessary to perform a cesarean section on Garry if he is in severe trouble. Or it maybe just down to nature that somehow he may be able to birth naturally through his anal canal. Either way he is going to suffer a great deal. I'd suggest leaving me here alone with him, this might be too great an ordeal for you both to witness." Al shook his head intently. "No way in Hell Les, WE STAY!" Lisa nodded her agreement. "We Stay, Les!"

Garry lay down on his bed after his shower, the weight of his gravid stomach proving too much for his back. The time was gone just after 10am. He slowly drifted into a deep slumber. The sun would set that day at around 4:35pm with the Full Moon rising at around 7:17pm according to the Weather Network.

The Beast knew it, in human form it was ready in the clearing. Ready to sniff out its unborn, ready to take it back to the pack. The unborn in Garry's belly knew it too, it was ready to leave this warm but cramped residence. It wanted out. And out it will achieve.


Chapter 4 and Conclusion soon :)

-- Edited by PoppedBB on Monday 21st of February 2011 06:32:46 PM

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"Chapter 4 - Initiation"


Leslie Whitton was sat in the living room of the Howstead's home. The sun was in the process of setting and he waited patiently with Al and Lisa. He had checked on Garry less than 5 minutes before. He slept soundly, as did the unborn within him. The only evidence besides his full term belly were the occasional shift and kick under his skin. They waited with baited breath, waiting for it to begin. Les had told them that labour would probably begin with the rising of the moon. Lisa Howstead was silently wishing it would be over. Al Howstead was knocking back Jack Daniels like he'd never see another bottle, getting slowly drunk in the process. Les was debating his options, his surgical equipment and protective wear was upstairs by Garry's bed, he hoped he didn't need to use it. The procedure itself was straight forward enough but without pain relief or anaesthesia to make it more pleasant on Garry, it looked to be a horrific prospect. Added with the fact that no-one knew exactly what would emerge from that belly, it didn't bear thinking about until it became the last resort.

Garry was startled awake with a searing, hot pain emanating from all over his domed stomach. Muscular contractions wreaked havoc within him. He looked out of his window and the sky was a burning orange colour. It hadn't even become nightfall. He bore down aggressively as contraction after contraction made his belly as hard as stone, straining his bellybutton briefly outward with each push. There was nowhere for the Thing to go. It was not connected to any tracts or his intestine to his anal canal. He didn't know this yet. Sweat began to cover him as he fought against the urge to force the Thing out of him. He yelled out as another agonising contraction gripped his belly. Les, Al and Lisa all heard it and ran to the stairs. Bursting into the room they were in no doubt what was happening. There was Garry labouring in agony and soaked in sweat, his blonde hair dripping and his belly slick and glistening. His legs bent at the knee and forcing downward until he was red in the face. "Mom, Dad, Please help me, I don't know whats happening! It hurts so much, please, Dr Whitton, help me." Lisa and Al ran to his side and held his hands as Dr Whitton removed Garry's shorts. He placed his hands on the inside of Garry's thighs, gently pushed them apart and examined him. A grim look on his face as he removed his fingers and pulled off the rubber glove. Garry continued to bear down and yell out whilst his belly came to life. Whitton was able to make out the distinct impression of a hand pushing up toward the ceiling, just to the right of the bellybutton. He signalled Al to quickly join him out in the hall. "Al, its worse than I thought, that Thing has no way out except through. Garry has no dilation or contracting of his canal. Unless we cut the damn thing out, there's no hope at all!" Al knew exactly what Whitton was saying, he went into the room and brought Lisa outside to tell her what was happening. Garry yelled out and was quickly becoming tired, he cried openly now, sweat drenching him and the bed. The Thing was alive and powerful, it kicked and pushed against his skin, intent on finding a way out. The pain was grave indeed as Garry fought his best to deal with it. Dr Whitton spoke softly to him. "Garry, the situation is quite serious, I need you to do something for me. I need you to hold on to the spindles on each head of the bed and not let go, everytime you feel the muscles harden just grip it tighter ok?? I need to get this thing out of you but I can't do it the normal way ok?" Whitton looked Garry right in the eye. "I need to cut you, here to here, and lift it out with my hands." He trailed his index finger from just below the bellybutton to just before the pubic bone. Garry tensed at what he was facing but nodded his agreement. "It's gonna hurt Garry and hurt bad but I won't let anything happen to you, alright?" Garry nodded amongst sweat and tears. He stared at the Thing in him, it was ferociously trying to get out now. It thrust up and down against the inside of his bellybutton, knowing it had found a weakness there.

Al returned to the room without Lisa, she had gone downstairs to fetch all the neccessary blankets, towels and antiseptic she could find. She would stay downstairs until Al shouted her it was ok to come back. Whitton prepared, he opened up his surgical bag, laying out what he needed. A scalpel, clamps, scissors and a suction tube. Al went to Garry and tried his best to compose himself. "Garry, remember I love you boy, I gotta hold down your legs now and help Dr Whitton. I'm here every step of the way with ya son." Garry nodded, agonised and yelled out again as the Thing increased its attempts to free itself. Blood began to ooze from his bellybutton as it threatened to rupture, the ferocious up and down thrusting getting stronger.

None of them noticed that the Moon had risen, the Beast was on its way, bounding through the forests like a crazed monster. It smelled it's cub, inside the belly, the tasty belly. It ran across the fields towards the Howstead residence.

Al held down Garry's legs at the knee as Garry gripped onto the spindles with all his might, biting down on a wooden Spatula as he did so. Al looked away as Whitton pressed the scalpel to Garry's enormous belly. It had just pierced the skin when an almighty Howl and a crash emitted from the windows. An enormous Beast crashed into the bedroom, knocking Al into the far wall and throwing Whitton straight on top of him. It roared at them with huge ferocity. They lunged for the door to get Al's gun in the closet right outside but the Beast slammed the door straight into the door-frame. It would not open again. Garry was frozen in fear, it was just him, his unborn and a hungry looking demon walking on all fours slowly towards them. The beast climbed atop the bed and stared Garry straight in the eye, saliva dripping off its hideous fangs. It growled low and deep. The unborn sensing its own kind, thrust harder and faster, the bellybutton finally split from its ordeal and a clawed paw emerged. Garry was in agony! The Thing in him had transformed from a human fetus into a werewolf cub. It's strength was hideous. It continued its onslaught but now with sharp claws and fangs to assist it. The Beast licked at the bloody belly and coaxed its cub to continue. Garry was screaming frantically now, his bellybutton transformed into some hideous birthing hole. The Beast snarled as it pinned Garry down and with a sickening shriek his belly split wide and the cub slid out between his legs. The Beast licked its bloody cub clean and just as it bit through the umbillical cord, Garry went limp. The Beast howled into the night sky, signalling the arrival of a New One. The cub, ferocious and hungry from its ordeal began to feast on the warm carcass before it. The Beast joined in and within minutes they had lept through the window and were bounding back to the pack.

When the Howsteads and Whitton finally succeeded in shot gunning the door down several minutes later they were too late. The Beast and its cub were gone, Garry lay dead on his bed, belly open and organs devoured.


To this day howling can still be heard on a Full Moon in Grayson's Point. The town lives on, blissfully unaware of the horror that overtook it that fateful December. The Howsteads never recovered from their ordeal after Garry's funeral and sold up their house to live in Toronto with their eldest son. They never returned to Grayson's Point.

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Chapter 5 - The Ending

"Garry Howstead was murdered by a werewolf" was the story going round town after his parents sold up and moved to Toronto.

The local housewives would talk about it over coffee and the husbands too, over a beer in the local tavern. But ignorance was bliss in Grayson's Point. They would talk like this for another year. The snows began about mid November the following year and as Grayson's Point was blanketed with feet of snow the howling once again graced the night sky.

In an abandoned railway shed, amidst a fierce blizzard, the cries of a kidnapped teen could not be heard. His belly swollen with cub and his labour progressing. In attendance also was the Father, the same beast that had killed Garry Howstead. Now fully grown it was twice the size of Liam Gronde, the sherriff's son and chosen host of its unborn. The teen didn't stand a chance as the cub ripped itself out of his belly and spilled his guts, then joining its Father in a feast of death before rejoining the Pack.

This horror will continue age after age and with it the population of Grayson's Point is slowly going to become much smaller.

A long howl pierces the night sky.........................

THE END

I really want to see the death of this Pack but will have to post a continuation when I find the time, please be patient my readers :)

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If I were to continue this into a Series with continued stories, whats everyone's ideas on what exactly you'd like to read more of?? Thanks

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I could provide many, different ideas for a sequel to this.

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I wonder if maybe when that werewolf's cub is fully grown, he goes out just as his father did to find another victim to bring his cub into the world.

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Hey NightShadow, welcome to the forums!!

Yeah its set to continue like this until someone stops, hunts down and kills the Werewolf Pack, thats the sequel im working on atm. :)

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Awesome, I look soo much forward to reading the sequel.

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Hope to read more of this amazing story.

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I'm considering new ideas for a sequel to this story, will work on it in due time :)

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Oh my god this is the hottest thing ever. The struggles, the pushing. SOOOOOO amzing. UNNNNNFFFF. BRB BED

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