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Hello. This is just a friendly warning system. There is going to be abuse, usually by demons (are they ever truely good?), graphic descriptions, and speedy mpreg due to magic. From the pov of carrier this time. Read, Don't Read, or Ignore. You're choices.

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        Hi…guess I should introduce myself. I’m Carl. Until a year ago, I was normal and happy. I had a family who loved me, a wonderful friend who I used to date, and a gorgeous man I shared my life and bed with. He was a foreigner. A hot foreigner I had met at the bar one night. After several months of off and on dating and fucking he asked me to marry him…or that’s what he told me. He asked me to be his Vita Tribuo. He said in his country that was the word for a life partner. I agreed and he took me to a building and had me sign several documents. That night he smiled and we made love one last time. Nicky wasn’t watching the road and a semi hit his car. It was horrible. I was the only one at his funeral. It was like he didn’t have family although he talked at great length of his brothers and sisters.

       “Ouch.” I rub the side of my stomach as the child moves. I took a deep breath and let it out slowly.

         “What is it now?” The voice of my lover and my master. I see Nicodemus’s horned head look into the room. “He’s nowhere near done yet. Don’t complain.” I sigh as he leaves me in this room again. I can’t help it. My body was never meant to carry a child let alone a demon. Perhaps I should explain.

         See after the accident, I noticed I was getting sick. I chalked it up to the depression I was having. I wasn’t eating right anyway. Most of those first few days afterward are a blank. Then crazy stuff started to happen. My landline began to ring nonstop, when I picked up nothing was there. I was getting random flashbacks of passionate nights with Nicky and always misplacing my keys. After a few weeks of rolling blackouts that only happened in my apartment, the ringing, and loss of keys or remotes, I got a phone call. My sister was in a mental institution. The next day my mother died and my friend and beloved ex was arrested for hitting and killing a child. That’s when I found out I was pregnant. Nicky came to me and didn’t look like the dark haired man I fell in love with.

         “Nico?” I see his head peek in. “Can I have something to eat? Please.”

            “Get it yourself, fat ass,” he said callously. His comment cuts me deep and I can feel tears welling up. I hear him give a disgusted sigh.

         He hasn’t touched me since the night gave birth to him. I think he’s only tolerating me. I hear hooves tacking on the tile and the fridge opening. There’s his mumbling before he comes into the room with two bowels of ice cream covered in a dark, almost black, red sauce with small lumps. Don’t ask what it is. I haven’t stopped craving it since that night.

          “Thank you, Nico.” I have to go. I can’t type and eat at the same time. I’d keep recording but….well you don’t want to watch me eat this. Trust me you don’t. Until next time.



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this is so cool! way to go! also great beginnning!

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I look forward to more. It's a very interesting story and I liked the prior story so much.

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         It’s been about a week since I wrote or recorded. A lot has happened since then. Nico has actually spent time with me. He came in last…Tuesday? Yeah Tuesday and laid with me. Unfortunately we didn’t do anything. He did lean down to whisper to my stomach though I can’t understand a word he says to it.

         I miss his cock up my ass. I’m pregnant. I have hormones. I’m allowed to say that. I’ve been horny since he’s been back. Ever since he’s been back actually. Even now I can see him through the door. He’s almost always shirtless with his muscular back and shoulder length hair. Okay so he doesn’t exactly have a healthy skin tone and he has sharp curling horns, but come on. The incubus is hot. He has no flaws. No scars or birth marks. His hips sway as he alters from one hoof to…I think he’s taunting me. Yeah…he’s teasing. I saw him smirk, showing off those sharp teeth. I sigh as my almost permanent errection gains no relief. I can’t reach it anyway. Can’t see it anymore.

            I rub my stomach after a light kick. I like this. This child…I can’t keep calling it that. Nico doesn’t like it. He wants me to ignore it. Hard to do that when it keeps doing these little rolls and kicks. It’s like the first few weeks Nico was in me. Well not in me in me but…I’m rambling now aren’t I. I look up as he comes into the room. Is he here to finally satisfy me? He’s on the bed now, his tails up around his torso as if they were holding something. “Nico?”

             “On your side,” he said. Ecstatic I roll to the side, closing the laptop and moving it out of the way. It could get rough and I don’t want to damage my only contact to the outside world. I can feel him on his hands and…I guess they would be knees…who cares? I can feel his chiseled chest against my back. His hands on my sides. His claws tease the slightly taught skin. I can feel the little one kick against his fingers. His lips brush my shoulder and work up to my neck as his hands hold my arms as they reach back to wrap around him neck. It’s odd. I would’ve thought he’d be trying to prep me but he hasn’t brought his hips remotely close and the tails stayed where they were.

            “Nico,” I breathe. “Please don’t tease me. Please. I need you. Please.”

             “I’m afraid you misunderstand. Your body has kept it and housed it well. Now he wants it. His time is precious.” I feel it now as his tails begin to move toward his hips. Something big…it feels like hands…huge hands. I bite back a moan of pain as something tries to force into my tight opening. I tense instinctually. “He has to be in Russia by next month. He has a flight booked in two weeks.” Nico’s claws dig in as a warning. I force my body to relax.

             It feels like someone is trying to tear me apart as something solid that could only be a head is forced inside me. I scream as it keeps coming. Nico is muttering something in that language again. He laughs as his tails move to help speed the process. The thing…demon…whatever it was…is stuck. I can feel the as it struggles. Its shoulders are too big. Nico is whispering as I scream, his one hand holding my struggling hands easily. His other hand trails up and down my back. I can’t relax. I can’t. It’s too big. Far too big. I feel his two tail tips trying to help stretch me open enough. Again he’s whispering. His hand goes to the base of my stomach to the front of my hips above my dick. He can feel it. I know he can. His head is right there on my bones. The baby kicks angrily. I gasp. I already know, I’m bleeding. I can’t do this. Then it stops.



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          I think I blacked out. I don’t know how long I’ve been out but I don’t think Nicodemus is in the apartment. My back hurts and I can’t breathe too well. My hand goes over the taught skin. Oh God above have mercy on me. “OW!” That hurt. I think that was my rib. Little bastard is under my rib cage. Yeah. Nicodemus isn’t here. He would’ve come running…then again maybe not. I hate this.

           I glare at my stomach as it rolls with a child that is no longer a child. I can’t believe I signed my soul away. I was stupid and naïve. I ruined my body for a fling. A stupid…stupid…hot…steamy fling. Only when Nicodemus isn’t around am I free to think what I want. I think he has a spell around him that makes me complacent. My wrists still bear the scabs where his nails dug in. I can’t twist well enough but I know there’s probably blood from my ass. Mom was right. I guess my homosexuality is a sin…and now I’m paying for it.

           I roll onto my side and off my back. I can feel the little monster roll inside me. I think I’ve grown since I was out. Then again that doesn’t surprise me. I think he or she…he. Nicodemus said it was a he. I think he’s going to be a big one and I don’t think my ass can take it. Nico was small. So small. It was easy. I open my laptop and begin to look for the date. “That can’t be right…” It says I’ve been out for nearly a week. “Nicodemus must’ve messed with it to mess with me…yeah… that’s it…ow ow ow ow ow Okay stop it.” My stomach growls. The little shit is hungry. I don’t want to get up. Getting up means more back pain. A swift kick to the lung gets me up and coughing. I think I heard the door. No. I don’t want to love the bastard in my stomach. I don’t want to love the damned demon that took my soul and freedom. I can feel my body relaxing already…

No. I shouldn't give.…

            I smile when I see him going to the fridge. I’ve been waiting for him for so long. I get up and lovingly rub my stomach. Feel him shift lower as gravity helps guide him so he’ll be ready for birth soon. I sneak up behind him and wrap my arms around his waist. “What took you so long? I had a bad dream where you left me forever and I hated you and your friends.”

            “Get you lard ass off me,” he says spinning to back hand me. I hold my cheek as tears form in my eyes. “Don’t you start. You think I like hitting you? You think I like watching you in pain? Do you? This is your fault.” I bite my lip and look down as the tears start to fall. I put my hands gently on my stomach.

            “I’m sorry,” I said as he moves away from me. “I’m sorry I made you mad. I’m sorry I made you hit me.” More tears fall to the tile. “I’m sorry I’m a horrible Vita.” I turn to run to my room and cry again when strong, warm arms wrap around me. I feel his chest against my back and his lips on my neck.

             “You’re so cute when you apologize,” he said softly. “But you’re ugly when you cry. You know I want you. You’re so beautiful.” His hands move to cover mine over my stomach and I can feel the little one kick from within. “But right now we have to be careful. Don’t want you to go into labor before he’s done cooking. You only have a few more days of this. Just a few more days and we get to try for our own.” He kisses my cheek as I turn to hug him. I cry into his shoulder and my stomach growls reminding me why I’m out here to begin with. He pushes me back in disgust. “You’re such a disgusting pig.” He goes to the fridge and begins to make the ice cream concoction I love so much as I waddle to the bathroom.



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Anymore, hopefully, it will come soon.

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Just a quick little post. Sorry it isn't longer.

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        I am so tired. He hit his growth spurt the past four days. My hand rubs against my stomach as it shrinks slowly back to a better size. At least now I can walk without bothering Nico. He’s asleep beside me. He hasn’t been in a good mood lately. If I didn’t know better I’d say he was dealing with mood swings. One minute he loves me and can’t get enough of me, the next he is hitting me and calling me a contemptuous, overbearing, pig who’s only supposed to look pretty and bear children. I grab a tissue as I remove the spare one. I think he broke my nose this time but, thanks to the magic, it’s healing.

         I rub my stomach again to try and easy the cramps. I’ve been getting them since three this afternoon but it doesn’t feel like labor. The child…demon is just restless. I am so glad I’m on my side tonight. I feel a roll as the demon tried to make itself comfortable in the never expanding womb. This one is heavier than Nico was. Ow…He’s always up there, his hooves constantly digging into my ribs and diaphragm. Or his shoulders on my bladder. I need to get some sleep. I curl next to Nico who’s arm comes around to gently hold me to his chest. I miss being close to him like this. I just wish the kid would hurry up and come out so we could be close again.

         I inhale as a cramp circles my upper torso. I didn't mean righ now. Its only a braxton hicks so I'm not worried. I settle closer to Nico. It's odd. In his sleep he looks so young and innocent. I bring my hand up to his face and actually see him smile as he turns to kiss my wrist. I brush what little hair I can reach away from his face. I hear him whisper my name as he pulls me closer still. The contraction ends as his arms pull me closer still. I noticed something odd. My chest, swollen with milk, is now against his flat chest. I can breath. My other hand feels my stomach again. His head is down lower. I smile and close my eyes. Content to be able to reach his shoulder again as I drift back off to sleep.



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         It's so hard to move. I can feel every limb he has. I can't see my feet and my hips are on fire. Oh God kill me now, I thought as I tried to shift under the weight of my stomach. At least Nico is able to help me so I'm not as weak as I was with him. I feel sorry for whoever is destined to meet this one. He seems to enjoy causing me pain. I shift my hips as his head turns. He's right there.

        "Nico. Please....it hurts. It hurts so much," I whimper as he comes into the room. As usual he doesn't say anything. I disgust him. I know. Who would want a disgusting pig like me? I'm surprised to feel his hand against my stomach. "Nico?"

        "Hush," he said gently. That scared me. He hasn't been gentle with me unless he was asleep. "He's stuck. I'm going to try and help him. Just keep quiet."

        "I don't want to move. Nico..." His finger went to my lips and I stopped talking. Tears fill my eyes as the demon shifts in me at the sound of Nico's voice. I'm shaking as Nico whispers in that language I will never know. I gasp in pain as a hand presses outward from inside. I bit my lip as the rest of the body followed. I whimpered around my lover's finger as the creature in me curled in on itself. I began to feel relief as my stomach began to shrink. Thank you, Nico. Thank you.

          I told you to keep quiet. If I don't focus, you could deliever him as is. I look at my chanting lover with wide eyes. That was new. I hadn't heard his voice in my mind since he left my body. I sighed and took deeper breaths as the demon grew smaller. It was a relief on my back and hips. During one of my exhales, I felt lighter. Looking down I saw Nico's eyes widen. I didn't understand why he was giving me that look. Then the contraction hit. I couldn't keep quiet. I groaned and moaned as it peaked.

          Four hours later, Nico is behind me. His hands are on my stomach as I road through another contraction. I could feel his excitement against my back with each painfilled moan. "Nico...It hurts. It hurts."

         "I know. You want me to make it not hurt?" he whispers seductively in my ear as my contraction began to subside. "I can make it more pleasurable." I can feel his smile at my nod. He picks me up easily as if I were a small child and place my dilating entrance over his massive head. I moan as another contraction hits. He chose that moment to impale me on him. I scream bloody murder. Between the pain in my hips and the pain from his sheer girth, I don't know which is worse, I'm ready to pass out.  Nico of course doesn't care.

          He lifts me up and down on himself. The movements coupled with my contractions are moving the demon further into my canal. My hips are burning as I try to shift from discomfort. Nico is taking it as encouragement. My pain soon begins to leave as my contraction subsides again and I can feel Nico brushing my prostate. My moans of pain become pleasure until my next contraction. I don't know how long we were at it but it didn't see long before I felt the head inching further down. Nico had to stop as I arched my back in an orgasm. The baby moved down further stopping his thrust with a painful gasp. I was pushing now as Nico swore and cussed behind me, lifting me off of him.

           He actually carries me off the bed to the wall where I had him. He had already prepared the blankets and towels as I pushed. "Nico...put me down. Please put me down."

            He obliged and instead of leaning on the wall like I did for him I actually laid down as the burning started. I can feel every contour of the baby as I push against the contractions. It was half an hour before I had even a quarter of the head out. Despite Nico pushing my knees above my shoulders or pulling them to help widen my hips, the child just wouldn't come out with the contractions. I'm hot. I'm tired. I want nothing more to than to die. Nico's encouragements aren't helping anymore and I'm starting to see grey spots in my vision as I push again. Nico is actually lifting me now as I push. I scream as I feel something tear.  I hear a thud as I feel relief.

             I'm numb to the pain despite the amount of blood pouring down my legs. I see why it was so hard now. His horns weren't on the top of his head, they were on the sides. He looked like he was about a year old, getting up and pulling the cord to his mouth so his evil little teeth could chew himself free. My baby...no. This was no innocent baby. I close my eyes and pass out against Nicodemus. May God have mercy on my soul.



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This is so crazy, yet good. I'm honestly curious as to how you even came up with the idea of this story. However it happened, I applaud you. You're an amazing writer.

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Thank you Aidenn. I was actually surfing for some demonic stories and noticed the lack of actual stories...and a crap ton of Inyuasha, Charmed, Angel, and Supernatural fics. Those are only good for a little while and usually show the demons going soft and actually caring for their "lovers" or taking the people hostage to kill them later during the birth. Went to bed one night thinking about it for a half an hour, had an odd dream (Demon's guide to obtain a new body) involving the demon and his mate, and posted the demon's story first. After a while, I got bored and slid myself into the shoes of the Vita Tribuo and got this. He's nowhere near done yet. There are still three more demons and then whatever children Nicodemus wants to sire himself. I'm just waiting for the mpreg muse to kiss again and figure out what demon is next.

Again I thank everyone for their support in this story.

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Wow. Well I thank you, I understand how little demonic stories are about. Yours truly stuck to me and I'm super excited for more. When you say most turn soft or just come off terribly, I agree. I've read countless stories that I just couldn't take anymore. I love yours. (:
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Well the muse visited last night around 4 a.m. and delivered this little spout. Enjoy.

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         I wake up God knows how much later to see Nicodemus hovering just outside my peripheral. I can hear him muttering to something about taking it too far and then agreeing reluctantly. I turn my head to look at him. He's talking to himself? "Nico?"

         He turns to look at me with an expression I'm not too familiar with. He seems worn out, tired almost and drenched in sweat. He brushes my hair from my eyes and gives the all too familiar smile, albeit a little worn from his obvious fatigue. It's then that I notice I'm naked, covered in what I can only assume is his cum. Either way it doesn't matter. I try to move closer to him but he keeps me at an arms length.

          "Nico?" I ask. Rejection washes over me and tears form in my eyes. I hear him give an exasperated grunt before allowing me to move closer to him. His grip is a little too tight and his face is turned away as if he smelt something repulsive. Looking at myself I couldn't see anything odd. I still had a slight pounch from the birth but that would go away soon....right?

           "I don't know why I even bother with you," he growled quietly. "All the trouble I go through for you and you don't have the decency to say thanks. That idiot set us back four whole weeks."

           I look at him confused. What was he talking about? He looks at me a minute before coming lower. He's still agitated. I can feel it in the way he's kissing me. Even worse he's trying to angle me without prep. What had I done to make him not take me more gently like before? I moan as he forces his tongue down my throat before impaling me. I feel him shiver before he begins a relentless rythme.

           Ever hear of the term "Hurts so good"? It wasn't like that. It hurt like Hell. It was like he was forcing something bigger than himself into me. The only thing blocking my screams was his own mouth. Those only seemed to encourage him as he thrusted harder and deeper into me. After what feels like an eternity he stills and fills me. His hand rests against my stomach long enough for him to chant in that odd language. He releases me and lets me fall to the linoleum. I hit my head on something soft but it doesn't cushion the blow. Now he's walking away. The door slams to our room and I hear the lock. Looks like he wants me to sleep here tonight.

           I turn to pull whatever is under my head into better view. I drop it in disgust and fear. A semi-fresh placenta. I turn away from it. Out of sight out of mind. My hands trail to my stomach and I begin to rub slowly as I began to invision our child forming. I close my eyes with a smile the thoughts of a little hoofed child or two running around with Nico's looks and my skin complexion.

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          It's been four weeks since the fucking and Nico still hasn't come near me. And who would blame him? I'm nearly the size of a house and the child....children move in me. I still don't get it. I'm having quads but Nico doesn't seem too thrilled. Then again he's probably got a thin, fit boy-toy he goes to now. He doesn't touch me or even address me. All he does is bring me food and that's it. No more cuddles or hugs...or fucks. He doesn't even tease me anymore. It's horrible.

          I found an few odd entries when I opened my laptop. I pretty sure they're from Nico. Here's just a few exerts but they go on for hundreds of pages in word. How he managed that I don't know.

              "God damn him. He doesn't stop moving. Humans really are worthless creatures......At least he got him out. Thanks to that idiot the others are trying to voyer a way through me. Fuck. At times, it's hard just to keep him safe from them."

              "I hate this. I can't sleep with him constantly shifting. I can't move further than the fridge. I swear he'll get the worse fucking of his life and I'll make him suffer. At least he's coming back. Damn him. Oh wait too late."

           Those are only the most interesting. I checked my email and there was at least 5 weeks worth of email. I don't know what happened but it made Nico grow more distant from me. I just want my Nico back.



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I love the muse-bug.

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Yay, there's more!

I am kind of sad to see Nico treating Carl so poorly. I know the story kind of depends on him being a bastard to a certain point, but I'm hoping he'll get better eventually.

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Yay for random muse brave enough to venture outside the baracade. :)

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             "Just relax, you fat ass," Nico purrs next to my ear. After weeks of hoping he'd forgive me for whatever I had done wrong, he was with me again. It's been two days since he shoved his friends into the new bodies inside me and my growth had reached it's peak.

              "N-nico there's Mmmmph." I can feel them moving and my skin feels like it is going to split at any minute as they jostle for room. I feel his hand on my stomach, rubbing it with his cruel claws gently. My breath catches and my body responds as it always does when he is around and touching me. I wiggle my over pressured hips against his groin. I was rewarded with a gasp and shiver then a claw across my gut.

              "You disgust me," he whispered sweetly. "Trying to seduce an incubus could is a very bad idea for one in your condition." I feel his claw slicing more of my skin and I moan again. I can't decide if it hurts or feels good. He's so close and I can't turn to kiss him and prove my love to him. My devotion. My angel. I put a hand over his as blood trails down my stomach. The scratches widen with the movements. I watch as a hand pushes out against the top of my stomach as a face pushes against the side.

               "Nico. Please. Please. I...I love you. I love you. Please," I beg trying to turn my whale like body to face him. I feel his hands stop me from turning.

              "Easy now," he whispers. "Don't strain yourself. You know I want to be with you. But now," his warm palm circles my side, "is not the time, my incubating hippo." I feel his soft lips against my neck as he kisses down my shoulder. His toned torso is pressed against my back as his hooves, legs, and tail entangle in my own.

               I moan and shiver before groaning as my body leans more towards pleasure than pain. Despite the nigh unbearable activity from my precious children, I can only think of how pleased he must be that I'm doing a good job. Despite his insults, I can hear the love. Oh the closer he is the better it feels. His arms can't even reach around me as his claws continue to slice at my skin. It just feels soooo right.

               I sharp kick as one's legs decides to go to my lungs and I'm moaning in pain. I'm in my right mind again and the pleasure is leaving as the wounds burn and sting. I scream out in agony as the wicked claws cut again and again. I hear Nicodemus murmuring behind me in that cursed language. The pain is steadly turning back into pleasure. My mind knows this is wrong though my body decides to enjoy itself. It isn't long until I am able to banish the thoughts of escape from my mind and settle against Nico again. I smile as I feel his hands go just below my sternum. His claws slicing down as he half climbs on me.



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"incubating hippo", you have no idea the pictures that came to mind. xD

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Lol, yay for more. I'm always happy when your muse revisits.

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           Oh there it goes. Amazing what these monkeys come up with. I have no idea why he has this thing up though. Looking over his last entry makes me laugh. Maybe I should post it. Give a good laugh to whoever finds this program again. By that time I will have a new name and a new Vita Tribuo. That useless ape broke.

           Young man found torn by unknown beast

      A man was found in the back alley of the 1400 block. Authorities believe it was the work of a large cat or bear. Anyone with any information please come forward.

          How do you like that? Even the news found his life unworthy of more than a few sentences. Not that I mind. The worm was still proclaiming his love to me even as my siblings crawled from his stomach and began to feast on his entrails. He brought who he was supposed to bring. But these humans. Go figure. I just sat and laughed as he begged me to hold him one last time.

          Now there is nothing to do but sit back and wait. If I'm right, then my brothers and sisters are going to find the perfect host again. Maybe this time I'll toy with my host a bit more. Until then I'll enjoy the freedom before finding a new toy. Preferably one stronger and less likely to break after so little births. I'm going to go back to my hunt now.

        Until the next time, who knows it could be you who is my next time,

          Nicodemous



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*Gasp* I DID NOT expect it to end like this! But then again, it would make sense. How many could Carl actually take?? I feel so bad for him, and thats a testament to your talent. I enjoyed this series so much! Excellent writing & Nico is a bastard you love to hate! I almost thought he was feeling something for Carl there. That makes me think about sensitive Satan from Southpark LOL. OK Im getting off topic. I hope there is more to come!

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Wow. I knew there wasn't going to be a generic happy ending, and I still sort of wanted one. (x It was so amazing. I'm glad I read it, and I hope you post some more.

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Thanks everyone for your support. I hope this muse comes back later. I was sort of hoping for a happy ending as well but I only write what the muse dictates.

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omg! i didn't expect that ending! holy shit! carl!!!!!!!

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